Okay where to begin.
1. In frame 2 Palupo’s hand is going through the arm of the chair.
2. In frame 3 it looks like Ricky is saying something like GO or OUT, not DUDE.
3. Palupo’s curl makes him look like he’s happy and alert in frame 5. Not scared/confused.
4. Ricky’s arms aren’t crossed right in from 6
5. Why is Ricky pointing at his eyes with his thumbs?
Good job. Another shitty Palupo.
As expected you came in with your critique pretty quick, and so I made a Palupo with all of the errors so you would comment but now I fixed them so you look like a damn fool.
That’s not fair. I take back all those comments.
Please delete my coments, cartoonist.
Mr Palupo-Drawer, please don’t delete th comment so it can stand as t stoke the to how u friggen trolled this guy soooo hard XD XD XD
Don’t worry. It stays.
Like the change is style.
OH LOOK MY BUDDY BULFROG ALL
I CAN BE PALS WITH EVERONE BECAUSE IM CARTOONIs.
STOP HOWBDNOBING AND EGT BACK TO WORK
Now that I think of it, you’re not Bullfrog. Sorry I thought you were someone else. But thanks. It takes a while to draw/paint, so I hope I can keep it up.
Huh, I get called bullfrog at work because of that annoying song. Ignoring the fact my name isn’t actually Jeremiah.
Anyways.. Really, the art is super nice with the paint and what not, I wouldn’t mind waiting longer, for the improved art style. The smoke in the first panel is really nice.
Thanks JDK! If I keep it up it should become easier.
Yeah my cousin was born when that song came out so that’s what we call him. I don’t know why I thought he’d have your last name, or why anyone in my family would read my comic.
i’m still in love with my cousin
premise for a comic: ricky gets his arm stuck in the garbage disposal so eric turns it on but come to find out he was just trying to get billy out of there
next scene eric offers mary anne (who is sunbathing in her bikini poolside of course) a “strawberry” smoothie. please draw it hot and sloppy: freestylin
If you think you’re ugly, you should see you and your cousin’s kid.
I will try to get to drawing that… Does “strawberry” mean something it doesn’t mean to you retarded millennials?
Muahahah that’s gotta be the first time I’ve seen a character do a take (cartoon term for making a scared face) by having a bong spontaneously explode:D
Maybe you should update already.
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